時間：2011-09-15 17:00來源：藍天飛行翻譯 作者：航空 點擊：次
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Because the data in the improved version is built up slowly and is logically connected, there are no sudden jumps from one subtopic to another - the paragraph is coherent. Note that the last sentence in Paragraph 1 also links back to the first sentence. This also helps to make the paragraph coherent. Relationship between Sentences and Paragraphs To build up information in a paragraph slowly, logically, and coherently, you must show the relationship between the ideas given in different sentences. You can do this by using connecting words such as "thus", "but", "and", "this", "that", "those", "in the same mode", "so", "at the same time", "as a result", "for the same cause" (refer to Section 4), and also by careful repetition of keywords. RULE: 6.6 Use keywords to make the relationship between sentences and paragraphs clear. We can use the "Improved version" in the last example to show the use of keywords. In that example we see that keywords are repeated, together with connecting words, to relate to the previously presented information. These keywords and connecting words are underlined in the list below. (1) The Instrument Landing USystemU in the aircraft UshowsU data that helps the UpilotU during the approach to the runway. (2) UThis system shows the pilotU the deviations from the "localizer" and the "glideslope" paths. |
